Hey Rebecca!
I think you did an excellent job and had some valid beneficial points on how to improve short-term memory. I do believe that taking information and breaking it down into small chunks promotes and has an impact on improving short-term memory. This also goes along with finding rhythm and acronyms as it creates a memorable pattern. I thought it was so cool how you always have what seems like always had a supportive background from parents to teachers. That is the best support system to have as it has improved your love and motivates you to be the best version of yourself.