Hello Bohan,
Your response was very insightful and detailed. I really agreed with the point you made about how they couldn't prove the causality, also when you talked about how they didn't really address other factors that could've also caused attention problems. The citation sources point is also really good! I never even thought about that but that really puts a nail in the coffin for scientific inaccuracy though. I also think that looking into the idea of TV affecting the attention spans of children early on is an interesting idea because I would like to see more accurate articles on the same topic.