Hey Lily,
I agree with your description of the article's inaccuracy and your solution to the issues presented. I also feel that the article should have presented numerical evidence rather than a simple survey. Your analysis of the articles was very similar to my own. I am glad you find Pavlov's experiments interesting as they serve as one of the most practical studies used to compare the human brain with that of an animal. “Pavlov’s “classical conditioning” is only one form of learning behavior studied by behaviorists” (Speilman, 2014, p.11). Maybe you would also be interested in learning more about other behaviorists and their studies.
Resource
Spielman, R. M. (2014). Psychology. Openstax.