Hey Timothy!
I think you did a fantastic job on this. What you had to say was well written and I liked how you backed up your reasoning. Toward the end of your response, you mentioned collecting the data instead of just being seven to change it to seven to thirteen. I do personally agree with that. The reasoning for it is they would be in eighth grade transitioning to high school they know what works and what doesn't work for them. Resulting in accurate data rather than someone inputting their opinion on how someone fouces. What was your thought process when coming up with the numbers? Again I think you did an amazing job and I'd love to hear what you have to say.
-Lily Cai